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Taken ch.6

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A/N Well, I'm filled up with Dr. Pepper and have an amount of creativity in my mind! :3 I'm working on another chap for Lost love as well~! I feel very proud of myself! So I hope you're all happy out there! I'm trying my best for you guys you know! I guess that all I needed was a little time to clear my head up and get fresh ideas X3 But here's another chap of Taken~!

Also I'm going to try out a way of helping you know who's pov it is. So review and let me know if you like it better, or if I can just go back to my old way of changing pov. :3

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                                                                                 0-Roxas-0

The four of us were silently walking along the sidewalk that looked eerily like the ones above water. Most things down here are the same. Accept they have no cars or bikes. The only other method of transportation than walking was these were tubes that would launch someone from on place to another. They looked pretty cool. When they would have to change directions, they would stop and turn on this cool gear system! I really want to go on that! And the merpeople seem to be more open minded to things. Like homosexual couples. No one would bat an eye to a same sex couple walking down the street. It was like it was a normal thing. But the buildings also looked a bit different. They looked like they were made out of coral. They sure are creative down here.

Axel still was huffing about me sticking with Cloud. Like when we arrived in the arena, he tried to tell me I had to stay with him, but I refused to unlatch myself from Cloud. Boo freaking hoo!

" Aw~! Is poor wittle Axie's take bewing difficult~? Can't see any ass, can wou Axie~?" The other redhead cooed, mocking Axel to my enjoyment. Axel, on the other hand, wasn't amused by the redhead's taunts.

" If you don't shut your mouth, I'll punch wou in wour wittle jaw, Renie poo!" Axel hissed, shoving a clenched fist in Reno's face. Reno didn't seem to care about the threat.

" That's not verwy nice Axie~! Don't wou know bettwer than to threwen wour elders~?" Reno didn't stop with his demeaning tone.

" Can you two knock it off. The last thing I need is you two numbskulls killing each other and leaving me short handed around here. And Reno, get your sorry butt over to your group! Same for you Axel!" The other brunette called from the other side of the arena.

I went off with my brother and Leon as Axel pouted and tried to help people. Leon appeared to be attempting to shake off earliers 'events'.

" I'm not going to be much fun. Most people aren't really interested in swords fighting this day. It's too early in the week for them. So I mainly spend my time hanging out with the swords." Leon was belittling himself to an extent that he made himself sound boring. At least he's not talking himself up like most stuck up jerks do. You could see Cloud light up at the word sword. I swear that I need to take him somewhere where they treat people with mental diseases! Like people with an obsession with swords!

" Did you say swords fighting?" Leon paused, looking at the excited blond beaming next to me, bewilderment clearly showing on his face.

" Um yeah? Why...? You like swords fighting or something?" Cloud scoffed.

" Only a lot! I'm the best there is at my old school, if I do say so myself. And I happen to have a passion for swords. They're the best weapon in my opinion." Passion? More like obsession! Weirdo. Although, Leon looked impressed at Cloud's record.

" Would you like to spar a little? It's not like I'm busy or anything."

" I'd thought you'd never ask!" They shared a smile together. My brother's being dorky again.

Not wanting to get involved in their swords play, I sat on the sideline. Watching as Cloud looked over the swords. And since this was just a swords fighting class, the swords weren't real. They looked wooden, but, if my time down here taught me anything, they were more than likely made out of coral.

As I thought, my brother went for the biggest, and most impractical one of the bunch. A large, heavy looking, brute of a sword.

" What is this one?" Leon looked wry of Cloud's selection.

" That's our Buster sword. It's a coral based version of the real deal we have in the back. We never really have anyone willing to take on the challenge of attempting to wield it. For obvious reasons." Cloud was running his fingers across the blade, as if it was a neglected child. I tell you, he;s a quack when it comes to blades!

" That's not any reason to not use a perfectly fine weapon! I'll use it."

" It's really heavy. Even I have a-" Leon was cut short when Cloud effortlessly picked up the menacing sword, and looked over to the awe-struck brunette. " You just picked it up?! As if it was nothing?!"

" We have swords like this in my town. We don't call it the Buster sword though. We really don't name our swords. But I have seen blades like this and have learned to wield them." Cloud looked proud of himself as he shifted the swords from hand to hand.

Leon hook his head, grabbing a random blade from the rack. They both were staring at each other. Leon's sword didn't look as frightening as Cloud's did.

" You ready?" They both had gotten into fighting stances, smirking wickedly at one another. That proves it. They're both insane! Cloud nodded his head, tightening his grip on the monster.

While running around and swinging the coral based versions of the real deal against the others. They looked like they both were on the same level.

" You're...pretty good for...huf...a human." The brunette admired as they both swung again, meeting swords.

They continued to go at it till they both had each others swords at the others throats. Leon told Cloud that they should take a break, which Cloud eagerly accepted. My blond brother fell next to me, reeking of sweat.

" Stay away from me till you wash up, stinky!" I pushed Cloud's head away, holding my nose. He chuckled at me, lunging and pinning me down.

" Aw~! But I love my little Rox~! Don't you love my oh-so-appealing sent? I think I smell wonderful!" He had his shoulder against my nose, forcing me to smell him. God, he needs a shower now! It smells like something died in his clothes! I was about to retort, when a shadow blocked out the light. As I looked past my brother's shoulder, seeing an annoying pout on the face of my kidnapper.

" So he gets to cuddle you, not me?!" The joy I got from playing around with Cloud left and I glared daggers at the upset redhead.

" Maybe because I've known him my whole life? Or the fact he's my brother? Or, wait! Maybe, I don't know, he didn't FUCKING KIDNAP ME?!" Cloud shifted uncomfortably, wanting away from my pissed off form.

" Hey Cloud. Why don't you come with me for a minute?" Leon called from behind Axel, getting Cloud's attention right away as said brother of mine jumped up and followed the brunette.

                                                                                 0-Cloud-0

I've never been happier to get away from my brother in my whole life. Thank God for sexy mermen and their ability to sense trouble!

" Um..thanks. I didn't want to be around the fire cracker I call a sibling when he explodes." It felt...awkward..to be around Leon, but at the same time, comforting.

" Yeah. I could tell he's not the most patient person in the world. And with him being stuck with Axel of all people...that doesn't make a good combination." Leon was still walking to somewhere, so I didn't know what else to do but follow him. But I didn't realize how close I was walking to him till our hands brushed. I glanced up at him, since he was taller than me, trying to see what his reaction to our brushing hands was. But he didn't really show anything was on his mind.

" So uh...where exactly are you taking me?" The scarred man came back down to earth, his eyes shooting over to me as if I suddenly popped up. What's up with him?

" Oh! Well...uh...I was planing to go to the locker room. You know...to...um...wash up a bit. I mean, neither of us really smell that great after..." Talk about stumbling over your words. I asked him a simple question. Did he not think this far? My eyebrow went up out of suspicion.

" Wash up? You mean, like a shower right? But I don't have any clothes here to change into." Leon pushed open a large door, stepping aside like a respectful person and letting me go through first.

" Shower? No. I was just going to use my tube." Tube?! Tube of what! He's not going to...

" T-tube?" The brunette looked strangely at me, standing in front of a row of lockers.

" Yeah? It's just like what you people call...lotion? It goes on if you don't have time for a wash. But it immediately is absorbed by your skin and keeps the clean sent. I just call it my tube. Since I need it a lot for working in an arena." Leon pulled out a light-blue bottle of 'tube'. I'm thanking my stroke of luck that it was dim enough that Leon wouldn't see the faint blush covering my cheeks. It's not my fault I thought he meant...that. Leon squeezed some of the tube onto his fingers, holding his free hand out to me. " Here, I'll show you. Just give me your hand." After giving him my hand, he gently rubbed on the white lotion type substance.

It really did soak into your skin! And it smelled like cherry blossoms!

" Wow, that smells great!" He chuckled at me, sitting on the ledge in front of the lockers.

" Do you think I'd have something that smelled bad?" In return for his mouth, I rolled my eyes.

" No need to be such a smart ass about it." Before I could protest, Leon pulled his shirt up over his head, revealing his toned body underneath. I gave myself points for not drooling at the sight of him. This guy sure has a nice body, that's for sure. "Wha-.."

" I can't really get all my body, so could you help me?" The 'I can't do it myself, could you?' line? I only met him yesterday and I'm already rubbing lotion on his bare body?

" Sure." Well, my voice is steady. Can't say the same for my poor heart. Straddling the bench, I squeezed some tube on my fingers, cautiously pressing them to his back. The man, who's ass was between my legs and painfully close to a bad part of me, hissed. " You okay?"

" Yeah, it's cold is all." I continued rubbing the stuff on his back, feeling his muscles underneath his clear skin. Now, I don't think I'm gay, but this guy has got to be one of the hottest people I've laid eyes on. And I've seen my fair share of pretty girls. The awkward feel to the room was just starting to fade when Leon lets out a deep moan. " If you keep rubbing like that I'll fall asleep." For my own enjoyment, I continued moving like I had before, causing Leon to purr with pleasure, arch into me. " You're doing mm~ that on p-uh-purpose!" The brunette whined/moaned.

" I have no idea what you're talking about Leon." I was basically giving him a back massage at this point, earning even more moans and groans of approval from the scarred man. If any of the other workers come down here, I can imagine what it would sound like I'm doing to him.

                                                                                  0-Reno-0
I was walking down to the locker room, planing on washing up before any more people started coming in. But right when I got in, loud moans reached my ears. Is it just me or does that sound like Leon...? Shaking my head, I decided I didn't want to know. Nope, don't even want to know! And I turned right outta there, I suddenly think I smell lovely.

                                                                                 0-Cloud-0

" O-okay. I think that's good now." Leon turned to face me, his legs flush against mine, our 'parts' comfortably close. His gun metal eyes looked at me expectantly, waiting for me to continue.

" Ah, why don't you lie down." His eyebrows knitted in confusion. " It'll help me put the tube on better." Trusting my reasoning, he laid down and I got ready to straddle him. This is a totally normal thing for two strangers to do! Having no other choice but to sit on his crotch, I carefully sat, coating my fingers with the delicious smelling tube. I started massaging him, once again making him moan in delight. What can I say, I liked to give massages to my brothers, who complained about being sore.

" Why are you mh~ so good at mm~ this?"

" I practice on my brothers a lot." Does he really have to moan like that? It's not doing good things for me.

" MM~! Lucky. I wish hn~ I could get this treatment everyday." He finished with a grunt.

After a few more minutes of rubbing, Leon sat up, holding his hand out for the tube.

"Now it's your turn." Wait, WHAT?! I don't want to have Leon being that close to me with both of us being half naked! Despite my mixed thoughts, I turned around and pulled off my shirt, my back going rim-rod straight. But when his hands touched my shoulders, I relaxed.

As he was rubbing my back, I could have purred like he did! His rough hands rubbing circles in my back felt great! Quietly, I hummed closing my eyes and faintly smiling. Unlike me, he didn't spend a whole lot of time massaging me, but told me to turn after a couple of minutes, much to my disappointment.

He made me stop straddling the bench and knelled on the bench, his legs on either side of my own. This doesn't look weird at all, nope. Before he even put any of the tube on me, something got in my eye, making me hiss in pain.

" You alright Cloud?" I rubbed at my eye.

" Yeah, I just got an eyelash or something in my eye." A hand was at my face, cupping my chin and lifting up my head.

" Here, let me look." Leon's face was inches from mine, his breath mixing with mine. Of course it didn't help that we both had our lips parted either.

                                                                                 0-Roxas-0

I had it with arguing with this redheaded idiot with no brain!

" Where'd Cloud go?" I asked to no one in particular, of course the redhead had to answer it.

" I think he went down to the wash room with Leon." At that I went in a direction i hoped would be the wash room.

                                                                                 0-Cloud-0

If I wanted to, I could kiss Leon again right now. And his eyes are so cool. A deep shade of gray that looks really good on him. And I do want to kiss him-

"CLOUD?!" A sudden voice asked, ceasing my thoughts and getting my head to jerk in it's direction. There stood Roxas, wide eyed and a face full of confused shock. " What the hell are you doing?!" Before I could answer, he grabbed my shirt before yanking me away from Leon and dragging me out of the wash room.

" O-oi?! Calm down Rox! Would you let me explain?!" People stared at us, Roxas raging and me shirtless and complaining. Great.

                                                                                  0-Leon-0

Cloud was dragged away by his brother, leaving me to wallow in my bewilderment. What...just happenend? I followed out of the wash room, meeting an amused Axel.

" I think I just may love that human Axel. And boy does he have wonderful hands~!" Both of the redhead's eyebrows shot up, his smirk planted on his face.

" Do I want to know what happened down there? Both of you without a shirt, you finding that blondie has 'wonderful hands'..." I flushed. God, does he have to be so sick minded?!

"It was a back rub! For Triton's sake!" The redhead's look never wavered.

" Sure Lover Boy~. 'Back rub'~. Then I'd love for Roxy to give me one of those~!" I probably looked like a flame angel fish by now. Throwing up my hands I left Axel and laugh and swim in his perverted thoughts. Like Cloud would do that to me!

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A/N Was it okay for a story I was about to drop? And I actually think that the new pov thing helps a little! But review and tell me what you guys think~! Can you tell I was in a Cleon mood today? X3

And lucky you Deviant people~! I decided to put in that little Reno part because it was BEGGING to be written!
I'm back baby~!!! :iconblushplz:
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I love it I can't wait to read more and more don't u dare stop! I love it! :)